I am learning to add some detail to my story.
Mrs Big and the Sea Snake
At
night time Mrs Big hear a sound. Mrs Big hear the sound like this “sssssss”.
Snd the thing was a sea snake. Mrs Big got frightened from the sea snake. The
sea snake got frightened as well.
I like adding the details to the story. It is tricky thinking about the 5Ws before I write my story.