Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Adding detail

I am learning to add some detail to my story.

Mrs Big and the Sea Snake

At night time Mrs Big hear a sound. Mrs Big hear the sound like this “sssssss”. Snd the thing was a sea snake. Mrs Big got frightened from the sea snake. The sea snake got frightened as well.

I like adding the details to the story. It is tricky thinking about the 5Ws before I write my story.